People spend a lot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before Is it a positive or negative development
PeUndoubtedy the spurt in the disposable income of populace have led them to spend lavishly on different things.
Even though availabilty of ample product has made the life quite luxurious, I cogitate this is a negative
development as it has enchanced the level of evils in the sociey and contaminated the environment
Nefarious activities prevailing in the modern society is the byproduct of extreme obession of material belongings.Seemingly
when a person who has hefty surplus amount spend on catering elevated demands, this vogue is replicate by other section of
society.Consequently, other deprived section of community chases the lifestyle of affluent and gives birth to myriads of
criminal activites.Also,it is biased to overlook the fact stated by Crime Control Council in America that major portion of juvenile
delinquencies are gainig ground owing to the greed among youngsters which they develop form watching others incomes and spending
habits.
Spurt in disposable money are accountable for surge in the desires which has eventually gravitated the vast consumerim and industrialisation.
As a result, the producers are eploiting the natural resources at a large scale to fulfil the demands of consumrers and producing huge number of
products without considering its adverse effect on ecology.To exemplify,in the gone calendar year a the survey was conducted bY WHO which
unambigously depicted that rise in consumerism is vastly responsible for dwindlingly of natural resources and degradation of enviornment.
Therefore, abundance of money leads to the trend ofunnecessary spending which would turn this planet into a nonliving place.
In conclusion,although prosperity in the financial resources has blessed the humans with fortune,it has generated plethora of
hassles in the community and detoriated the ecology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79927007299 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47391771937 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64598540146 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 267.156425256 49.4020404114 541% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 264.833333333 106.682146367 248% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.6666666667 20.7667163134 220% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102264860373 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478592001754 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391034084005 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0284427284875 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036250410655 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.7 13.0946893788 219% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.88 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.25 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.09 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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