People’s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than other factors .To what extent do you agree or disagree
These days, purchasing style varies among people due to various factors such as age , needs and so on. People are divided in their opinion regarding whether shopping style depends on the age bracket and not other factors. I completely disagree with the notion.
Undoubtedly, people go to shopping for different reasons irrespective of age group however, there are two main factors that contributes to shopping habits.Firstly , gender. To illustrate female wants and needs differs from their male counterpart and this could lead to their difference in how they shop. For instance, female have a flair for buying handbags, flashy clothes and so on where, men shop for wristwatches , canvases and jeans. By and large, gender is a major reason for different purchasing norms.
Secondly, another main cause is socio-economic status of the consumer. To make clear on this, the 'high' class person go for known brands. They do not go for unbranded products however, main brands are expensive so not every one can afford such a luxury. To exemplify, in the pharmaceutical sector , pfizer and gsk drugs are considered to be high-end drugs and are expensive therefore, not all patient or patients relative can afford it. On the whole, the socio-economic cause also affect people buying habits.
In conclusion, humans shopping habits does not only depend on the age group. In addition , several factors such as gender and socio-economic reason of the people also contributes to one's way of buying things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, by and large, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20746887967 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85582631396 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605809128631 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9334950915 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6428571429 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106926700593 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400556489283 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346873673198 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076454142573 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407346985101 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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