Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to in suburbs or countryside rather cities.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, traffic congestions and gridlock are prevalent in the urban areas and this has resulted to urban to rural area migrations. Certain individuals opine that to mitigate traffic and transportation issues, people should be persuaded to live either in rural districts or outskirts of town rather than living in cities. In this essay I totally agree with the aforementioned.
Undoubtedly, living in urban area is associated with a plethora of struggles however, individuals should be encouraged to live in the conurbations or rural areas because of the following reasons. Firstly, low transportation fares. Cost of transportation in rural and suburbs are pocket-friendly because of easily accessible road networks. For instance, in villages one could easily transport oneself's to and fro market square to his or her abode without spending huge amount of money. In general, transportation in villages or at commuter belts are pocket friendly and easily accessible.
Secondly, less air pollution. In other words, urban districts due to increased number of vehicles plying the roads, there is a rise in the emission of carbon monoxide. This emission causes air pollution and also deplete the ozone layer there by causing global warming. A recent research by the USA has shown that air pollution in Japanese cities are 70% greater than her suburbs and villages. On the whole, rural or outskirts of town have low traffic and less transportation problem due to lower number of vehicle plying the roads.
To recapitulate , rural areas and suburbs have less transportation problems , traffic and grid locks when compared to urban areas. I reiterate my stand that to solve these issues that individuals should be encouraged to stay in rural districts or near cities because of air pollution and low transportation fares.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, for instance, in general, in other words, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34843205575 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05143230133 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529616724739 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4164165255 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182402915758 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057796452367 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054204933756 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118783826554 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520490965163 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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