It is often observed people have believed that while their visits to other countries they should behave like the natives. Although, it might be a possibility that, their own customs may not be welcomed in foreign countries. This essay will show some aspects about forth said.
Firstly, most of the people around the globe bound with their culture and religion, any intrusion or blasphemy of any kind about those rituals or cultural practice might hurt their feelings and could create a probable chaos situation. For instance, people in India may not like if a foreigner makes fun of their deities. Secondly, a certain action could be against the law of the country that a visitor should know before they land, it can be very helpful to avoid any inconvenience. Lastly, while trying to adapt others culture we may seem fake or it could be more embarrassing. It would always be better, just to behave with good mannerism.
Most of the tourist countries, on the other hand, like travelers to have an interaction with their own culture and customs. They run their countries economy by providing workshops and cultural classes. This is a big attraction among the visitors because instead of making fake accents or mimic the culture they encounter with specialists from whom they can learn. Apart from this, we should never forget from where we belong to, it should not be a case, that while adapting others behaviors we forbid our own national identity.
In conclusion, according to my opinion, visitors should be aware of the customs and rituals of the native countries before their visits to detriment any chaos or hurting someone's feeling, although, it is also vital, not to forget your own identity and should have a proud in the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95238095238 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49825706285 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561224489796 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6605940383 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191540765906 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07131685286 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644392050057 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138189517835 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392047980711 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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