It is often observed that television broadcast a numbers of different sport activities from around the world, many believes that is making our young generation less active. In my opinion, these telecasts have more participation of making juvenile encouraged about the sports, in this essay further will be elaborated.
To embark upon, a certain set of the population think watching television is not a productive activity, however, by watching games on them children can gather information related to the current trend and knowledge of sports techniques. Apart from this, student can get influenced by the prominent sports person or by the game it self that they may choose it as a career. In a recent peace of article by eminent "The Times", around seventy percent of world young generation like to spent time on tubes whenever some tournaments are happening. Certainly, this enthusiasm force them to leave their couches and play sport on ground. Moreover, these programes emphasise on how these sports are vital in our life, having this perspective institutions also promote their students to watch techniques on specific outdoor activities.
On the other hand, the major deriving force for scholars to not actively indulged into outdoor games are the pressure regarding studies and exams. Secondly, lack of facilities and proper place could be the other reason to stay limited with small screens. In an empirical survey conducted by the London's "Oxford University", which ascertained that sixty-fifity percent of juveniles do not beleive to having a sport career could be beneficial for them, as it demands high physical strength, agility and stemina. Consequently, they just enjoy watching tournaments on televisions and focus on their future goals.
To conclude, In my opinion childrens should be encouraged to watch these sports on television as they can assist the child to encourage them towards the sports which can increase their interest in games by physicaly as well as psychologically participate in them. It is not possible to ignore the overuse of watching television could lead to detrimental situations, but this is not true only for sports telecasts only.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
... prominent sports person or by the game it self that they may choose it as a career. In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, apart from, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37861271676 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95768688749 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598265895954 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4141490498 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.153846154 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8461538462 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178172466171 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663900299926 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509341163484 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117090588898 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596068088753 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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