People who go to live in other countries, should follow the customs and tradition of the new country. To What extent do you agree or disagree?
With the emergence of a new world order called globalisation, immigration became a reality and people began relocating to developed nations in search of better opportunities. Whereas many embrace the culture of the host country, others choose to retain their own traditions and values. Though respecting one's root is good, immigrants should learn to adapt to their host nation, lest they want to be isolated. This essay evaluates the issue and believes that the reluctance to accept the culture of the society that a person lives may only result in conflict with the surroundings.
First of all, it is difficult to let go of your culture entirely because a person can not change overnight. At the same time, one should make ample effort to adjust to the new culture, as it can help you avoid becoming an outcast and social misfit. It may only lead to more stress and tension along with being prone to cultural shock. For example, my close friend who migrated to Australia could not come in terms with the Australians’ way of life, ended up being home sick and returned to her motherland, after a week.
Another aspect to consider is that you can not expect the foreign nationals to change their own culture for the newcomers, on top of their willingness to share their resources with you. Moreover, welcoming the positives of the new culture might enrich your own inner core and morale while reinforcing the qualities of one's own culture. For example, most nations practice universal ethics such as humanity, respect for all and equality.
In conclusion, those who migrate to other nations should be prepared to appreciate the culture and learn to adapt to that nation, while holding onto their traditional beliefs and imbibing the positive factors in the host culture. This can help the immigrants to carve out a successful life in the alien nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun embrace seems to be countable; consider using: 'many embraces'.
Suggestion: many embraces
...search of better opportunities. Whereas many embrace the culture of the host country, others...
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Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...raditions and values. Though respecting ones root is good, immigrants should learn t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96485623003 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6745775068 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591054313099 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9695968117 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.538461538 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123447692483 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421851892095 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357910621811 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763498043802 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233982272626 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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