People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life.
What are the most significant of these problems?
How can these problems be tackled?
Living in large cities is aimed by many of young people who are looking for more job opportunities, or even for a better lifestyle and more leisure. However, large cities life has many obstacles.
Firstly, the crime rate in urban areas is to its extreme level. People are not safe to go out of their house late at night especially women and child. There are many cases printed in newspapers everyday of kidnapping, rape, murder and burglary. To elucidate, Gurgaon is reported as the city with most criminal activities in 2018. The government should take necessary steps to reduce crime by providing proper education to people as well as giving them employment opportunities as people who are illiterate an do not have any jobs do these unlawful activities to earn money.
Secondly, the metropolitan areas suffer a problem of over-population and hence leads to traffic congestion. On an average there are more than one million vehicles on road everyday. People have to spend hours in travelling from one place to other because of which many suffer from issues like aggression and stress. To illustrate, Delhi is reported to be the most populated and traffic congested city in the world.
Lastly, the cost of living in big cities is very high. People have to send more that half of the portion of their salary in purchasing basic necessities and amenities. It makes their life miserable and thus leads to many health issues such as depression, cardiovascular problems and migraines. The government should come out with new schemes to ensure that the basic necessities are available at reasonable cost and they do not have to spend huge amount on them.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that despite of the fact that life in metropolitan areas is very difficult and involves huge risks, government should take necessary steps to curb this issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...estyle and more leisure. However, large cities life has many obstacles. Firstly, th...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...re are many cases printed in newspapers everyday of kidnapping, rape, murder and burglar...
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Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ortunities as people who are illiterate an do not have any jobs do these unlawful ...
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Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ortunities as people who are illiterate an do not have any jobs do these unlawful act...
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Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... more than one million vehicles on road everyday. People have to spend hours in travelli...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...e portion of their salary in purchasing basic necessities and amenities. It makes their life mise...
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Line 7, column 362, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...out with new schemes to ensure that the basic necessities are available at reasonable cost and th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, thus, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75790821996 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566343042071 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3242982782 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206759297103 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600075371595 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472642572279 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982498476046 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042010527099 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.