A person’s health is their own responsibility rather than the government’s responsibility.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
it is indeed a debatable issue that whether we individuals are responsible for our health or it is the duty of the government to take care of the health of its citizens. Some people put their by point by saying that it is the responsibility of government to take care of the health of the people of the country. I do not agree with this notion and i think that everybody should take care of the health.
The reason why it is people's responsibility for their health stems for the fact is that an individual knows about his appetite so he could decide what to eat or what not. Moreover, it is the person only who suffers because of his bad health so it becomes sole responsibility of people to take care of their health.
it is said , health is Wealth. so if people are healthy only then they can maintain the worklife balance. Hence, will have good economic and health status. And thus, to be in the race of this competitive era one should take care of his health by themself.
Now, let us look at the part why people say government should also take responsibility of the health of its citizens. The first and foremost reason is that growing economy is indirectly dependent on health of citizens. thus, to make the country grow government should take care of the health of its people. Secondly, in case of epidemic or pandemic, there is need of efforts in collaboration, individual efforts can not serve the purpose. so, at this time government should take the command to take care of its citizens.
All in all, i do agree with the statement that it is responsibility of individuals to take care of their health but whenever need comes government should play it's part.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56478405316 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69870596822 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458471760797 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9467387158 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277755617453 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10891833734 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782217245994 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189646816579 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808052146144 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.