A person’s health is their own responsibility rather than the government’s responsibility.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
it is indeed a debatable issue that we individuals are responsible for our health and no role is to play by government side.but, some people put their by point by saying that it is the responsibility of government to take care of the health of the people of the country.i do agree that everybody should take care of the health however government's role can not be neglected.
The reason why it is people's responsibility for their health stems for the fact is that an individual knows about his appetite so he could decide what to eat or what not.moreover, it is the person only who suffers because of his bad health so it becomes sole responsibility of people to take care of the health.
it is said , health is wealth.so if people are healthy only then they can survive in the work life .hence, will have good economic and health status. And thus, to be in the race of this competitive era one should take care of their health by themselves.
Now, let us look at the part why people say government should also take responsibility of the health of its citizens.the first and foremost reason is that growing economy is indirectly dependent on health of citizens. thus, to make the country grow government should take care of the health of its people. Secondly,in case of epidemic or pandemic, there is need of efforts in collaboration individual efforts can not serve the purpose .so at this time government should take the command to take care of its citizens.
All in all, i do agree with the statement that it is responsibility of individuals to take care of their health but whenever need comes government should play it's part.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68402777778 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82698326648 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486111111111 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.5688932633 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.625 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277607701143 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137627845898 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832714099998 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184913408304 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697907439936 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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