Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people says trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while other says housing facilities should be built instead.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is an issue about how unoccupied lands in urban areas should be used. Some ecologists advocate the idea of planting trees in these places to protect nature, while some developers suggest to use them for construction projects. This essay will discuss both points of view and agree with the idea of greening cities.
Let us begin with reasons why some ecologists say that people should exploit free city areas to grow trees. The first reason is that trees absorb carbon dioxide in urban areas. People in cities suffocate of exhaust gases, so arranging green areas along the roads can reduce the level of green house gases. Another reason is that green areas in cities can home small wild animals and birds. Apart from citizens, different creatures, such as cats, dogs and birds, dwell in cities, but unlike people, they cannot live in houses, so greens zones would be suitable for them as natural habitats. Furthermore, trees in streets can stop soil erosion. Earth in city areas tend to degrade over a long time, but the roots of trees usually prevent it when it rains and weakens the soil.
However, some developers believe that inhabitants should build both apartments and office rooms. They justify their point of views with the following arguments. First of all, there is an acute housing shortage in cities. Councils should turn available places in urban territories into residential areas either for the homeless or people in need. Secondly, new offices, built on previously unoccupied city areas would stimulate more businessmen to open companies. Entrepreneurs often complain that cities have no appropriate buildings for offices. Thus, vacant areas in the city should be used for the development of new office spaces. Finally, more workplaces will appear in the construction industry. New construction sites will secure employment in cities, so citizens can always find a job when the rest of the world experiences high rates of joblessness.
In conclusion, although some builders suggest constructing buildings in vacant areas in cities, I think that it is more reasonable to use these places in an eco-friendly way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, apart from, as to, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16379310345 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59318821446 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3799455175 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.85 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29418822826 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801934346197 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567414777188 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166591094071 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668322851875 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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