Plastic bags plastic bottle and plastic packaging are bad for the environment What damage does plastic do to the environment What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem

Essay topics:

Plastic bags, plastic bottle and plastic packaging are bad for the environment.

What damage does plastic do to the environment?

What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem?

Submitted by huda21 on Tue, 02/07/2023 - 02:13

Nowadays, it is believed that plastic bags, plastic bottle and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. In this essay, I would like to inform about bad effect of plastic for the environment. I will some suggestion or solution for government as a result and conclusion.

In the one hand, there are damages of plastic for our environment. Firstly, plastic cannot destroy by weather. For example, people are throwing plastic in everywhere which this plastic can bot destroy very well because plastic need recycle with fire. As a result plastic makes our environment looked bad and may this plastic have some bacteria that makes illness. Secondly, plastic makes accident for our environment. For example, people that throwing plastic like everywhere makes plastic contain to close drainages and that causes flood in the environment. As a result this matter makes problem for our environment such as flood and destroy our environment.

On the second hand, there are some solution to solve the problems of plastics. Firstly, the government can collected the plastic and burn the plastic in the one plastic. For example, the plastics burn in the factory and used for recycling energy. As a result the environment will be looking good. Secondly, the plastic can be bury in the field beside home. For example, trash of home like plastics collected in one place like grave and people live in the home burn this plastic or other reasons this trash home can bury together in one place for fertilizer plant in the home.

To sum up, this matter can solve by self-aware of people and other may related to government that should be manage the trash from everywhere. Other solution the government can makes some law that contain for people throwing trash in the everywhere such as river and environment.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 248, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... factory and used for recycling energy. As a result the environment will be lookin...
^^
Line 10, column 109, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'managed'?
Suggestion: managed
...ay related to government that should be manage the trash from everywhere. Other soluti...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 177, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...here. Other solution the government can makes some law that contain for people throwi...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04682274247 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60430983693 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.391304347826 0.561755894193 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8073490864 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.479890681733 0.244688304435 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197287369767 0.084324248473 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108437795758 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313519062548 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11980416278 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 248, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... factory and used for recycling energy. As a result the environment will be lookin...
^^
Line 10, column 109, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'managed'?
Suggestion: managed
...ay related to government that should be manage the trash from everywhere. Other soluti...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 177, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...here. Other solution the government can makes some law that contain for people throwi...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04682274247 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60430983693 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.391304347826 0.561755894193 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8073490864 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.479890681733 0.244688304435 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197287369767 0.084324248473 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108437795758 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313519062548 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11980416278 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.