Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think it should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?
The usage of plastic bags has increased at unprecedented speed on account of its convenience to human daily life. However, this phenomenon leads to some detrimental impacts on both organism and natural environment. Personally, I strongly agree with the statement that prohibiting plastic bags is a requisite to slow this uncontrollable destruction.
First and foremost, there is no doubt that plastic bags have become a risk to marine life. In clarification, there are numerous aquatic animals mistaking plastic shopping bags for their food. As a matter of course, they ingest these dangerous bags; as a result, plastic stuffs cannot be digested and these animals end up dying.
What’s more, plastic bags are unexpectedly considered as a human health hazard. Whenever people buy foodstuffs, they will be given a couple of plastic bags but they do not know that these bags will harm to their health because of toxic substances which made up these things. According to a recent survey, people who are prone to use plastic bags to contain certain foods will have more potentials to suffer from lung cancer, heart diseases, and many related illnesses.
Last but not least, it is attributed that plastic bags have immensely negative impacts on natural environment. In fact, plastic bags are non-biodegradable stuffs that take 2000 years to decompose. Apparently, excessive accumulation of plastic bags in dumpsites will contaminate the environment. Besides, manufacturing plastic bags need a huge amount of oil. Hence, that results in the loss of natural resources.
All in all, in my point of view, I believe that plastic bags should be forbidden to preserve natural habitat and protect human health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, so, in fact, no doubt, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33948339483 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95530722094 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60147601476 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3568291406 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247388474498 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845539076942 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343774881627 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137675451987 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127463041271 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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