Popular events like the Football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
Every four years, the whole world stops to watch international sporting events such as the Olympics and the Football World Cup in which athletes show their best performance to make their country proud. These sporting occasions have proved to be helpful in easing international tension in difficult times when powerful leaders were trying to control the world’s economy and other governments were fighting over the land.
The Olympic Games are one of the best examples which prove how sporting events can bring nations together, at least temporarily. From the ancient History, when Greeks and Romans would interrupt battles to participate in the games, to the more recent international disputes, when athletes from Palestine and Israel would forget their differences, compete peacefully and even embrace each other after an event. Moreover, these popular events have called the world’s attention to the terrible consequences of wars; thus some leaders have tried to reach agreements to end their disputes and live peacefully.
Similarly, international sporting events show benefits in some developing countries which live in a daily internal civil war. For example, Brazil has a high rate of unemployment, lack of education, hunger, crime, poverty and corruption which leads to an immense embarrassment of being Brazilian and a low self-esteem. However, when the Football World Cup starts, the Brazilian squad, which is considered the best team in the world, provokes an amazing feeling of pride in their country. Most people seem to forget all their problems and even the criminal activity decreases. They paint roads with the national colors, wear the Brazilian team shirts and buy national flags. Moreover, the competition brings families and neighbors together and even rival gangs watch the games and celebrate peacefully.
In conclusion, popular sporting events play an important role in decreasing international tensions and liberating patriotic feelings as history has shown.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'moreover', 'similarly', 'so', 'thus', 'at least', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26409495549 0.247107183377 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.154302670623 0.155533422707 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.121661721068 0.0946595960268 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0445103857567 0.0501214627716 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0207715133531 0.0437548338989 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0741839762611 0.122226691241 61% => OK
Participles: 0.0415430267062 0.0403226058552 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79319513428 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0326409495549 0.0326793684256 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.103857566766 0.0861772015684 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00890207715134 0.021408717616 42% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0296735905045 0.011925033212 249% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1992.0 1933.35771543 103% => OK
No of words: 304.0 316.048096192 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.55263157895 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.424342105263 0.374742101984 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.332236842105 0.28420135186 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.256578947368 0.203846283523 126% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.154605263158 0.137316102897 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79319513428 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.037074148 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608552631579 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 68.6256672706 60.7387585426 113% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 25.3333333333 20.7743622355 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2999895768 49.517814964 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.0 127.492653851 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7743622355 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.814263465372 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 58.5570175439 49.1944974215 119% => OK
Elegance: 1.72972972973 1.69124875643 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41005641122 0.332605444948 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0898922646585 0.102741220458 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0517724236876 0.0668466124924 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.582372879577 0.534860350844 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.197670064097 0.148594505496 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175673518108 0.134430193775 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819956151891 0.0742795772207 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.359239314053 0.324371583561 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.142559138079 0.0638462369009 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297237127108 0.228012699653 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491073075413 0.058150111329 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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