Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is believed by some that international events are only a source of income for a country to support its economy. However, in my opinion, mega events like Olympics, cricket & football World Cups help to release international pressures and provoke patriotism in the nation.
Games and sports are good for mental health. Most of the people feel much lighter just by watching games. On broader scale, sports act as a bridge between two nations and help to resolve political issues and tensions. Mega events like World Cup act as catalyst in this process, diverting the attention from national issues to the games. As an example, during the time of General Zia in Pakistan, India was ready to attack Pakistan which was prevented when General Zia visited India to watch a cricket match. Thus, we can conclude that popular events are essential in releasing tensions.
On the other hand, these events act as a tool to unite the nation and trigger patriotic emotions among the individuals in a healthy manner. For instance, it can be seen that during international events, nations gather to buck up their teams and wear the color of their teams along with face paintings to express their patriotism. It can also be seen from football matches when all the supporters wear the kits of their respective teams. So, it is obvious that popular events are essential for the patriotic emotions of a nation.
Following the analyzing of the importance of international events in eliminating tensions and restoring patriotism, it has been proven that mega events are vital for diminishing international pressures and provide a platform to express patriotic emotions. Government officials should encourage such events by ensuring necessary resources for it, which will be beneficial for their nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, thus, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15120274914 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.741427126 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563573883162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9264506998 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.071428571 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245330764604 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892751967292 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788939246768 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157670605345 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568242849176 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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