The population of most cities is growing as people move to cities to find work and new opportunities.
What problems does overpopulation in cities cause?
How can these problems be solved?
The prospects, which cities offer, appeal to a great of people in need of employment. However, when urban areas are excessively populated, it frequently leads to some negative implications. This essay will consider these consequences and suggest possible solutions to them.
Let us with difficulties that newcomers pose on cities in search of jobs and prospect. The first problem is that it often leads to house scarcity. More households want to possess a house of their own, but cities cannot accommodate their needs immediately, so many people have to live either in cramped flats or in the street, which pose much inconvenience to other citizens as well as city authorities. Another problem is that it usually results in high unemployment. The flow of immigrants in cities may aggravate the situation with absence of jobs, so many citizens will complain that newcomers have taken their workplaces. Furthermore, it may result in more congestions on the roads. The volume of traffic will increase to the level, when it will become impossible for people to commute to work on time, because more new citizens will settle in the city and purchase cars as well.
To tackle these challenges the government should take the following steps. Firstly, city governors should build more apartments. To deal with a growing number of the homeless, the officials should allocate more of the budget for construction of apartment buildings, so that more families will obtain housing. Secondly, with financial aid of authorities, more entrepreneurs should open new companies. The government can promote companies to set up new business by loans at low interest rates and, therefore, provide more vacancies in the labor market, which will secure the unemployed with jobs and lower the resentment in society. Moreover, city architects should reconstruct narrow streets. Construction companies should either widen highways or make some road one-side in order to achieve reduction of jams on the roads caused by the flow of immigrants.
In conclusion, although the flow of job and opportunity seekers to cities may lead to a plenty of problems, it is possible to solve them, if the government take the above mentioned actions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 791, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e some road one-side in order to achieve reduction of jams on the roads caused by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25915492958 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90146861691 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571830985915 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7741239759 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.722222222 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214089737248 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662006246196 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444760743998 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118957979874 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423562525375 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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