At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In today's scenario, a number of countries have more population of young adults than senior citizens. In my opinion, such an imbalance between younger and older people has more benefits to country and people than any disadvantages it might bring. My views are supported further with reasons and examples.
Despite the minimum drawbacks below, I believe that the benefits gained by nations due to greater proportion of young adults than senior people are extremely useful. The biggest advantage is that young people have more energy and capability to work and so can contribute efficiently to the growth of the nation. For instance, India's 45% of the population is below the age of 30, which helps the nation to grow above 8% GDP, unlike the average world GDP of 3%. The other benefit is since a larger proportion of young people are working, the government has enough funds that it collects in the form of tax. This fund can be utilized not only to develop infrastructure, transportation and hospitals but also to develop new technology and medicines with the aim to improve the standard of living of citizens.
Admittedly, there are some issues involved when a nation has greater number of young adults compared to old people. One problem is that older people will have to retire early in order to solve the problem of youth unemployment in the nation. Because there are many young people who are competing for the same job and can work efficiently than older people, organizations are forced to retire old people. For instance, according to research in developing nations in Asia, 56% of older people complained that they were forced to retire mandatory by the top authority in order to employ young adults and increase the productivity of the organization. Another point to consider is that there is a possibility of an increase in crime in the society. Due to fewer older people in society, young ones are not mentored properly and there is a possibility that they resort to crime and other activities to satisfy their over-ambitious demands.
In conclusion, the growth of the nation and enough funds for the development far outweigh any of the minor problems that could result from having a major population of young individual's compared to senior people. This is because drawbacks are easy to tackle and can be overcome through simple actions to be taken on time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97493734336 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72739517312 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496240601504 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3611839258 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0625 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9375 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189883258966 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639855696352 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530954765202 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119563445585 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309125862524 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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