In many countries, mainly tourists, but not local people, visit museums and historical sites. why does this happen, and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

Essay topics:

In many countries, mainly tourists, but not local people, visit museums and historical sites. why does this happen, and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

When it comes to art and history different people have a different preference. It is certainly true that in many nations, outsiders are more keen to explore culturally places: art and gallery, and historical heritage; whereas native people show indifferent attitude. Several reasons are there behind this phenomenon. However, if certain measures are pursued the interest of native people could be rejuvenated to a considerable extent. Both the causes and effective ways are discussed further chronologically.

Discussing the causes of towny citizen's not visiting art and cultural places. The first and the most apposite one that could be put forward is such people are provoked by media. In other words, owing to over-exposure to foreign television channels, operas, radio and so on the human being is inclining more towards international culture; therefore fading their interest from local civilization. A dearth of time along with beforehand know-how of the art and culture are other few culprits of such occurrence. On the other hand, visitors coming from another country, visit such places in order to acquire knowledge about the country's history they are visiting.

Nevertheless, few steps could reconcile the situation and enchant the local people to pay a call to museums and historical monuments. The most compelling way is to give assignments and research project to students in schools and colleges, pertaining to such places. Doing so shall automatically push people to go to see these places. Another potential way is the state should organise various cultural as well as social events at such a place- especially during festivals or public holidays. So that people can come and spend an ample amount of time there with friends and family.

Thus, to conclude it can clearly be stated that media instigation and pre hand information are the major reason for such a situation, yet assistance through the centre and educational institutes shall fascinate the local mankind to go to these enchanting places again.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as well as, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32710280374 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86566095238 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616822429907 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5176263744 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200405708511 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566761286627 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395420454427 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113915533343 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00712446537513 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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