Balance of anything and any type is important. Be it in the food you eat, or the society you live in. Population of the world is growing very rapidly and with this rapid increase is causing many adverse affect to nature. Along with this increase, many countries in the world have observed through regular censes, that the percentage of youth in the population is much higher as compared to the older generation. Many researchers believe that this imbalance in the population is not healthy and it can have affects, which can impact a growth a country in various ways. They fear that when there are too many young people in a country, after some decades these number of people get old and it will be difficult to make balance.
However with too many young people, it allows a country to move towards growth of economy and prosperity. With young people comes new ideas and energy, which transforms in an overall growth of the nation. Strength of a nation is with its youth and they can rely on them to expand the various factors. Advantage of having young population is they are healthy and can think in positive direction with lot of optimism. Youth has the ability to bring fresh ideas, which allows more opportunity for others to progress in the field they work.
To conclude, in my opinion it is imperative to have a population which is healthy and optimistic. Youth should get proper education and with it the can secure a better future. This results a nation to reflect, in overall growth. When a country show such results it attains a high place amount other countries.
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- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others,however,say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.Discuss both views and give your own op 73
- Ecotourism is now defined as responsible travel to natural areas that conserves the environment What are the advantages of ecotourism How can we make ecotourism more popular 56
- Films and games can be accessed at any time from mobile devices the smart phones tablets and laptop computers Do the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantades 36
- In recent years the structure of a family and the role of its member are gradually changing What kind of changes can occur Do you think these changes are positive or negative 100
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 377, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... youth in the population is much higher as compared to the older generation. Many ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... will be difficult to make balance. However with too many young people, it allows a...
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Line 6, column 230, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a nation to reflect, in overall growth. When a country show such results it attains ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71841155235 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47006870898 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541516245487 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5195591518 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221409376288 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670622852119 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504485421547 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139827405796 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591450210341 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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