From last decade the health topic is catching significant attention of public. Myriad of people believe that the best way to improve public health is by increasing number of sports facilities. At the same time numerous people think that along with sport facilities, government should focus on other measures too.
On one hand, nevertheless, it is reasonable to say that the improvement of health of an individual is directly proportional to the number of sports activities of that person. It is scientifically proved that the more you are involved in sports, the more healthy you are. However, because of busy pace of life and modernization of current life people have started avoiding their involvement in physical training. In my opinion, we should not ignore the fact that lack of sport facilities in reachable areas, is one of the main cause of ignoring sports activities. To address this problem, government should take initiative and should build more and more park , play areas or stadiums.
On the other hand, when it comes to the health benefits, along with the sport activity, our life is vitally depend on what kind of food we are consuming. When we talk about our young generation, most of the juvenile prefer to eat only junk food. In long run, these foods have very injurious health effects. Due to consumption of unhealthy food on regular basis, people could suffer from cancer or akin disease.
In the conclusion, I would like to say that in order to improve public health government should focus on providing number of sport facilities. All the activities should be free of cost and should be easily available for all kind of people. Government body should pass some rules for junk food items. For instance, junk food should be costly that healthy food. To overcome this problem, every individual should take initiative to make it more effective.
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: depended
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tiative to make it more effective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03205128205 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68475561403 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544871794872 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8684612045 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3529411765 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251969652971 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884925925986 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112908701573 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164748197837 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102013072212 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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