Dear Monica,
I hope this letter will find you in good health and prosperity ! I am writing this letter to inform you regarding a book which I read recently during my summer vacation in Switzerland. The name of the book is " THE SECRET OF POSITIVE THINKING" written by Veceant Arthur. I would like to share my experience of reading and learning from the book.
The speciality of the book is that it could become a great source of bringing positive vibes in anyones life. Last year when i was suffering from depression, one of my close friend recommended me this book. After reading it, I have noticed that it has significantly changed my point of view towards life.
However, my friend has read this book from Wiston library in south New York but it is available on Amazon e-commerce site as well. I am also aware that currently you are suffering from same situation which i faced last year. Therefore i would highly recommend you to read the book.
Your's Sincerely,
Mohsina
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- Some people say that it is impossible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 61
- The increase in people s life expectancy means that they have to work older to pay for their retirement One alternative is that people start to work at a younger age Is this alternative a positive or negative development 82
- Some parents think that helping their children with homework is good Others think children should do their homework on their own Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Write a letter of complaint to the manager of an online shopping site about a few products that you bought and aren t happy with In your letter Give details of your order Explain about the problem with the products Say what you want the manager to do abou
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80346820809 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64378435569 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635838150289 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1139433739 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326394013949 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129186220818 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780570998651 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224743560256 0.12726935374 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498314582808 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.