Although, Many people believe that nowadays some countries like to include large number of young adults. While some believe that older people also include in the country. However, both has its own pros and cons. The reasons to support my view point are discuss in the upcoming paragraph.
To embark with, some countries want to add large number of young people because of them economy development of country is increase and it is most beneficial for them. Also, they are very energetic, skilful, smart and healthier then the old people. To illustrate, currently Indian people like to fly in other countries because in that country they can get high amount of money and they can do study as well as job. Moreover, country collect high ratio of tax from the young generation that is useful for the growth of country's Gross Development Product (GDP). Furthermore, workforce and delegation of youth is the major part to lift the economy of that country.
On the contrary, there are also a few drawbacks to having more young people. To start with older people are well experienced then the young people. For example, the person who became doctor currently is not happy with their profession while older person have an experience and happy with their profession. In addition, lacks of culture and ethical value in young people. In fact, without older person youth don't know how to give respect to other person.
Thus, to conclude the discussion, it can be finally said that the fact of having large number of young adults are very beneficiary but it is also fact that every coin has two sided face.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'discussed'.
Suggestion: discussed
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...le. In fact, without older person youth dont know how to give respect to other perso...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'face' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'faces'.
Suggestion: faces
...also fact that every coin has two sided face.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in fact, as well as, on the contrary, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88278388278 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38343066287 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553113553114 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4205157807 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267412214939 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846229548948 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085935269331 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156303930084 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477983885096 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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