Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The advancement in health, education and trade activities are necessary for the growth of a country. Nevertheless, the government of developed country should provide support to under privileged nation in these sectors. In my opinion, I do believe that supporting the poor countries should be the duty of prosperous nations as it will help in their growth and overall development.
The underdeveloped countries lack the proper facilities of providing health care system, optimum education and a proper trade and exchange system. They lack the necessary resources and funds to allocated in these sectors. As a result, not only the literacy rate is low but also people suffer from illness for which no cure is available to them. Moreover, there is depression in the economy as the commerce, business and finance sectors is not very strong. In the end, people live a miserable life not able to meet their basic necessities and thus, indulge in illegal and criminal activities.
However, I believe, the government of the developed countries should take up the responsibility to provide support to poor countries in terms of providing finance and resources. They should provide them with the latest and up-to-date medical facilities and trained doctors which helps them to cure their dieses. Moreover, schools and colleges should be constructed and people should be motivated to study and enhance their knowledge and skills. Furthermore, the trade and business sector should be enhanced by opening multi-national companies and exchanging goods and services, to ensure that not only there is financial influx but also the employment rate in increasing.
In my opinion, I strongly agree that the political party in power of a developed country should provide financial and social assistance to the needy and disadvantaged countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 521, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...a miserable life not able to meet their basic necessities and thus, indulge in illegal and crimin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36805555556 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94823360749 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6294609496 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174586458716 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629247851234 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512882660722 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105102976742 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493402624457 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.