Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
An inclusive education and healthcare system are the two-pillars ensuring a country’s stable and sustained economic growth. Albeit, some denizens believe that education and medical care should be funded by the government, others might have an opinion that the payment for the same should be the sole responsibility of the community itself. This essay will argue that a sound education and health care system must be state sponsored to ensure an enlightened and healthy society.
On the contrary, making education and health care treatments free for all the people is not possible as it will not only put pressure on the government to reserve lump sum amount of the budget but will also put a burden on the society as they will have to pay huge taxes to the ministry. For example, in the USA the education and medical facilities in not free, sadly, it pressurizes the society by paying extravagant price on education and health. Additionally, parents cannot afford to send their children to schools because of the skyrocketing fees. For example, In India, many people who are below the poverty line cannot send their children to school because of the high fees and neither can afford the expensive treatment costs
To embark on, undoubtedly, access to education is one of the most essential human rights. Along with creating political and social awareness it also creates employment opportunities. Besides providing free education for atleast upto 18 years of age, the government should take steps to encourage the younger generation to pursue schooling. For example, according to the recent report Canada has 98% of literacy rate because of the free school education provided to children. Moreover, the country’s administration can benefit the society by proving free health maintenance, by introducing health insurance schemes. As a result, people will not fear to pay a large share of their salary expensive treatments. A healthier society will contribute to the overall economic, political and social enhancement of a nation For Instance, in UK people are issued with health cards which covers more than 50% of health protection cost.
To conclude, I strongly agree that in order to have a well-established and politically strong nation the management should make it a point to provide free edification and Medicare facilities to its society where not only the literacy rate is high but the people are living a fit and healthy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can afford the expensive treatment costs To embark on, undoubtedly, access to edu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19949494949 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90317839644 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5611599454 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.071428571 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222074431461 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763536671966 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067103031404 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130845652152 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537413593601 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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