Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
According to those in the travel business, the nature of the average 'holiday' is changing. Rather than seeking a relaxing break in a far-away place, people now want excitement on their holidays and are keen to participate in unusual and challenging activities.
Do you agree or disagree?
Travel agents working in travel companies have an opinion that people preferences for holidays are changing. They plan for trips that include adventurous activities rather than laid-back trips. In my opinion, I do believe that the type of holiday package a person books depends on his age, need and preference elderly want relaxing holidays, whereas younger generations need exciting holidays.
At the outset, older people work in big organisations and have a hectic job profile would plan vacations for far-away places, spending days relaxing and resting so that they can escape from all the stress as well as sedentary and monotonous lifestyle. To be more precise, they like to connect with environment and feel the serene, calmness and beauty of nature, instead of loud noises, crowdy places and artificial landscapes as a result, they organise tours to remote locations. To elucidate, according to the recent report by the tourism industry people who mature and aged plan their visit to beaches and hilly areas where they can rest and relax.
Furthermore, youngsters plan their trips that involve more of adventurous and thrilling activities. They like to have fun, excitement and adrenaline rush. Simply stating, youngsters undertaking more of physical activities like trekking and swimming will aid in improving their physical health conditions and thus they will be more active. Furthermore, activities like hiking and bush walking helps them to gain more confidence and patience for uncertain and unfamiliar events which will not only enhance their overall personability and lead to success in future but also will improve their social and decision-making skills.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that the choice of holiday package that is adventurous or peaceful depends on the personality and thinking of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42807017544 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79444553057 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638596491228 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.990081942 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.636363636 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0678252974665 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301292944411 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387342740349 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0448782771531 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429212633061 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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