Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education.
Do you agree or disagree?
For many many years, prison has seemed to be a top choice for punishing criminals in most countries. Nevertheless, it is said that education solution is better than putting them in jail in controlling the crime rate. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with that statement. I think each manner have its own benefits and no specific way is assumed to give more advantages than other.
On one hand, condemning villains to jail has a lot of perks that have most social endorsement. First, prison looks like a deterrent against crime. Malefactors cannot have a chance to harm civilization such as rapists, robbers, murders... Second, imprison crooks will create a great time for them to think about their extrajudicial behaviours, to feel guilty and to tell themselves to live better.
On the other hand, education is a method that serves as a remedy for the origin of crimes. It aids in heightening people’s intellect and that is of necessity. Another point is that evildoers are usually jobless. In those cases, vocational courses should be an amazing way to sure about their stable life, which is the thing they are looking for. When they have a work, a life and an obvious purpose to live, the ideas of committing illegality will be dispelled.
To conclude, there is no certain approach to deduce whether imprisonment or training take dominant in declining the heinous action rate owing to their distinct perks. To bring a huge advantage for the community and the criminal themselves, both methods should be combined.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: many
For many many years, prison has seemed to be a top ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, i think, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00392156863 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81350070838 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654901960784 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7608583356 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106978445685 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336932277761 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345904878588 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602426490848 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536058444922 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.