Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Agree or disagree.
Providing punishment to the offenders assist to curb the issue of offences,and for that reason in many nations, the usual method is to send criminal in the lock-up. Apart from this, there are other potential solutions available which are beneficial to overcome crime such as by educating people, alongwith giving vocational training. I agree with the latter view because most of the unlawful acts occur in order to fulfill own's desire which can be either the basic one or to live a luxurious life.
To commence with, the number of people who commit the crime are not only illiterates, but also suffering from the unemployment. In other words, some individuals attempt felonies to complete their fundamental needs whereas others do to live glamorous life. Therefore, to sort out such problem, education is the best method. For instance, if person get education, he will acquire the skill by which he can participate in any social activity or in any work. Consequently, it becomes a win-win situation for both because person gets remuneration and society becomes crime free.
Moreover, the government should render the job opportunities which aid to decline the rate of unemployment. It means that people can get job without any difficulties, and able to earn enough money through which they can fulfill their necessities. As a result, crime can be diminished because there are no reason for masses to do misdeeds. Apart from this, if culprits go into the prisons, instead of improving their own mistakes, they learn to carry out more felony from other criminals. Thus,to solve the matter of offence, it is better to provide education.
To core out, instead of sending lawbreakers into the jailhouse, countries should render education, in addition, they have to create more job opportunities. By doing so, it is not only help wrongdoer to be an ideal citizen of the community, but also fruitful to solve the issue of crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, apart from, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06289308176 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80757034604 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0118257014 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156700565697 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508453368293 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481427745704 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928376345701 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178285796382 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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