Q: Some people have great ambitions in life, others don’t. Do you think ambition is important to succeed in life? Is it a positive or a negative quality to have?
Everyone wants to be successful in life and achieve their goal but rarely people become successful and majority of people fail in their goal. The people who are considered successful have one common quality that is they are found ambitious which drive them to be focused and achievers. In my view, ambition works as catalyst for success.
People who lack the ambitions generally fail owing to following reasons. First of all, absence of ambition directly related to missing goals in life and it is commonly seen that such people do not have any set goals and timeline to work on, resulting, trying different things in life but not able to complete anything in all aspect. Secondly, recurring failure and tendency of experiment for longer period brings the self-esteem down and later get frustrated as their efforts are not turned in final output. For example, my brother appeared in all competitive exams and did not clear any one because of not setting target and ambition to become someone.
However, rights goals & ambitions in life produce extraordinary results and help people to become success. It not only generates the energy for chasing the target but also generate quest to learn anything which is required to win. Famous footballer Meesi had ambition to become the football player and such turned him to overcome the serious diseases. Furthermore, people become so energetic that they do not get tried of doing what they like, consequently become master of that area or field.
In conclusion, everyone may not understand the importance of being ambitious but in every field such as corporate, sports, education and so many others, only people with right ambition reach at top and it is their best and positive quality, people perceive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 584, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...all competitive exams and did not clear any one because of not setting target and ambit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56363483035 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574394463668 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.004629451 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.833333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240511281948 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869413536998 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057722384536 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144655163408 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238451440991 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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