You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You should write at least 150 words.
You are visiting your close friend’s city next week.
Write a letter asking your friend to be at the airport to receive you. Express your desire to see the famous historical places in the city.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Tom,
Finally, I have booked my tickets and arriving London on 23rd June 2018 around noon and I am writing this letter to refresh your memory that you promised me to receive at airport once I land in London.
I am going to be in London for a week and plan to see all historical places because my son is very fervent in history and I do not want to miss this opportunity for him. I searched the travel guide which talks about several historical places but I believe that not all are worth seeing. Therefore, I want you to extend your advice about the museums, forts and any relevant places. In addition, my family which includes my wife, daughter and son are interested to see the real play at London fort which I heard very exciting and insightful about past events occurred. It would be a help if you collect the information about timings and schedule.
Do not be exasperate, I have kept enough time to spend with you and other friends. I kept all my evenings except Thursday free and we shall visit our university pub, hostels and city center clubs in night. I am very excited about the meet and anticipate joyful trip of London.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
With Love,
GoG
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd anticipate joyful trip of London. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
^
Line 8, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rward to hearing from you. With Love, GoG
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49545454545 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3715732129 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.983326187 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9090909091 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23373775255 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847689007162 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658969276241 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144017455565 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039547578013 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.