The qualitis and skills that a person require to become a successful in today's world cannot be learned at university or any other academic institution.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is believed by some people that various qualities and skills require to become a successful individual are not learned at colleges or any other academic institutions. In my opinion, I disagree with the statement and believe that university education is a necessity and is required in most of the professions in today's world.
Discussing my argument about why university education is important for learning vital qualities and skills to become successful.The first and the foremost reason is studying at academic institutions assists in learning basic skills. These skills are necessary to enhance learning and thinking ability that are crucial to become successful. For example, according to a recent report from Harvard university, 72% of the young people who are university passed out were employed and had a good career prospects compared to 30% who did not attain university.
Another point to consider is that attending university or any academic institution aids in learning vital qualities like importance of team work and good communication. These qualities are a prerequisite in most of the professions to become successful and are taught in a detailed and practical manner at universities. For example, students are given a problem and are divided into several teams where each team members have to coordinate with one another in their team and come up with a feasible solution; thus, giving young students a live example of various difficult situations that can occur and ways to overcome them.
However, there are few vital aspects that cannot be overlooked in favor of skills and qualities that assist individuals to be successful without attending academic institutions. It must be admitted that there are few professions where experience helps to a greater extent to learn various skills and abilities. To illustrate, learning the techniques and qualities to cook or sew clothes fetches far better result from experience on hand rather than learning at university.
To conclude, it can be commented that although there are few professions where individuals gains success without going to university, most of the professions and job require basic abilities and skills to achieve success which is taught at university or any other academic institutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, thus, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42296918768 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0111510646 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504201680672 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5955124602 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.333333333 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345583649275 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139204737366 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841797635019 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207107204933 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722767548517 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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