Some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events.
Do you think this is positive or negative development?
Nowadays, a lot of nations are looking up to sponsoring various cultural events. Uncertainty expressed by some individuals swirls around on whether, this trend is beneficial or detrimental. I uphold the conviction that spending much money on tickets to attend sports and cultural events is highly advantageous for both individuals and societies.
To begin with sports, It is evident that sports have a great role in our lives and watching them is not only for fun but also they teaches us tenacity. While some people think that going to such events is a waste of money, I believe that the expenses paid for those events will benefit all individuals in the country. To illustrate, supporting sports like the famous film star Abhishek Bachan is the owner of pink panther the kabaddi team of India in which people end up spending money on tickets, paves the way for growing this industry. This money could be used to set up more local sports centres, which would encourage more people, especially youngsters, to practise sports. As a result, they would be healthier and would definitely be protected from going astray owing to the boredom.
The cultural events are also very crucial to the whole people as they aid us to know different cultures, which in turn helps to settle the intercultural tolerance in the society. I concede that some cultural events are slightly expensive, but the expenses on tickets of such events to maximize the national income because they are highly taxable. This; consequently, contribute enables governments to invest that money to improve the economic status in the country. For instance, The 2018 International Film Academy awards. The 19th edition of IIFA is being held in Bangkok. This money could easily generate income via tourism and even create multiple job opportunities in various sectors to enhance the people's quality of lives.
To conclude, although some people refuse to squander money on attending sporting and cultural events, I believe that expenses on those events are highly beneficial to the country. The income generated not only, could be used to support sports and culture which are advantageous to us as well as youngsters, but it also, could also be directed towards the welfare of the weaker sections of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'teach'
Suggestion: teach
... them is not only for fun but also they teaches us tenacity. While some people think th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, so, well, while, for instance, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08533333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68086354247 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2512690192 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.1875 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280251074899 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877557293762 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596580924725 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18139261474 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039138055848 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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