Question
In many countries, the age of criminals is getting lower. Give reasons and solutions to the problem. Support your position with relevant example.
Rate of crime has been increased tremendously over past few decades. Youngsters and
teenagers are mostly involved in crime than elder in most countries around the globe. To
become rich in short time and be successful are the possible reasons for it. To overcome this,
children should guided about right path since childhood.
There are number of nations in which young age group are mostly prone to crimes in order to achieve success and money in short period. Reason for this is the lack of education and
right guidance in their lives. For instance, small age group people, mostly attracted towards high
class life and facilities and want to achieve those without any hardwork. Thus, it leads them to
follow wrong path of robbery, poaching, stealing and ransom etc.
However, this kind of problems can be resolved by giving the right education to children from
their younger age. If, Parents and teachers teach them about the consequences of breaking the
laws and doing some bad deeds in later life. That's why, punishment should be stringent
against crimes along with rehabilitation centre to change the mentality of criminals to become a responsible citizen of the society. For instance,
according to recent survey, by including the subject of laws and order in schools may decrease the crime rate to about 15
percent. As a result, youngster will know the adverse effect of offences which allow them to be civil in every way possible.
In conclusion, lower age group has been found to be major contributors in the rate of crime
in large number of countries. A good education about civilization may help to reduce the crimes in world by guided them a right path rather than going to wrong one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
... mostly involved in crime than elder in most of countries around the globe. To become rich in sh...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...r to achieve success and money in short period of time. Reason for this is the lack of educati...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ing, stealing and ransom etc. However, these kind of problems can be resolved by giving t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 46, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...and doing some bad deeds in later life. Thats why, punishment should be stringent ag...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in short, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9587628866 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49806670562 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3552301918 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0841708813168 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027572977591 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312035051913 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0266361527106 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295273930273 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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