You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter • tell your friend what the event was • explain why you think your friend would like the event • invite them to come to the event with you
Dear Nia,
Hello! How're you doing? I want to let you know about the cultural event which I recently attended. This event is going to be run for 10 days and involving the exhibition of traditional attire, way of living, cuisines and local history.
Well, I know that you have keen interest in our heritage and culture since childhood. That's why, you have opt for history as your major field in studies. I believe, if, you visit this exhibition, it will definitely help you in your local history project. Moreover, you will thoroughly enjoyed the whole exhibition because of the content and things involved and will get the chance to visit hometown and your family after so long.
So, you should come to this cultural event and grab this opportunity to remember the best old memories of our life and local community. I will guarantee that you are going to remember this visit for whole life as a best memory.
I'llsee you soon.
Your friend,
Raman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...r heritage and culture since childhood. Thats why, you have opt for history as your m...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'opted'.
Suggestion: opted
...re since childhood. Thats why, you have opt for history as your major field in stud...
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Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'enjoy'
Suggestion: enjoy
... project. Moreover, you will thoroughly enjoyed the whole exhibition because of the con...
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Line 4, column 213, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...o remember this visit for whole life as a best memory. Illsee you soon. Your fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73493975904 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38608975095 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.095119252 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4545454545 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292654772704 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128740496445 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808601089471 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158174884156 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490506818503 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.