It is undeniable fact that air travel is the fastest and convenient means of transport. However, it is often argued that airline companies mainly focus on upper-class travelers when they apply certain advancements in flying services. In my opinion, I firmly concur with this given notion.
To begin with, the fact that airline companies in business travel try to increase their income by doing regular progress in their services for their frequent customers. The main reason is that people bought first-class tickets for enjoying the luxurious amenities in the business class section while flying to their destinations. Evidently, by any chance, if any aviation company is unable to fulfill their business class services, the passenger will not consider traveling next time from those flying companies. Consequently, airline companies will have a negative impact on their business by losing their customers. Moreover, according to the BBC survey, 75% of people are preferring to buy business-class tickets instead of economic class tickets while flying to their destinations.
Furthermore, companies are not willing to make more progress in economic class flying services. While recent modifications are implemented for first-class customers during air travel journeys, airline companies provide limited services such as water, sandwiches to people who used economy class service in air excursions. Conversely, aeronautics companies offer a variety of foods, drinks, and deserts to upper-class passengers during air travel. Finally, the recent studies from ABC show that 25% of people consider buying economic class air tickets.
In conclusion, I concur that it is precisely evident that major developments in aviation firms have been implemented considering the demands of business class customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 672, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7249070632 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92311997613 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565055762082 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3586627231 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.461538462 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19759832136 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767583910658 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301792940917 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122334596549 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313762339115 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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