In recent time, extensive marketing and promotional activities forced people to buy things out of the necessity. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, promotional activities have become a common phenomenon in the modern era. Some people believe that extensive marketing activities induce people to buy goods unnecessarily. This essay will completely agree with this view.
One of the key reasons how marketing activities persuade people to buy things out of the necessity is that the overstatement of products’ features lures people to buy goods despite having no stipulation. In most cases, promotional activities spread messages with inflated features of any products to its users, creating an internal demand among people out of the necessity. As a result, people are induced to buy those heavily promoted products to avail those features, although they do not have the real necessity of those goods. According to a marketing research firm, strong marketing and promotional activities of companies drive revenue by about 15.0%.
Another important reason for influencing people to buy goods through promotional activities is that massive commercialization of newly launched products creates a demand among its users despite their necessity. Generally, most of the companies generate a strong echo while launching new products or services, resulting in an emergence of customers’ intention to buy. Henceforth, people will likely buy new goods despite analyzing the necessity of those goods. To illustrate, I bought a newly launched laptop from Lenovo despite having 2 laptops.
In conclusion, I completely agree with the view that strong promotional activities and commercialization can successfully persuade people to buy any goods out of their necessity because of circulating inflated features of products and generating demand among customers. In reality, apart from the quality of goods and services, marketing activities have become the strongest force to drive sales.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, while, apart from, in conclusion, as a result, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14311541996 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507246376812 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0888887916 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.076923077 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330217070675 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123959554061 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757729845009 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219482898429 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067727131517 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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