In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or a negative development?
Large shopping complexes have become a booming success in the recent years, with growing urban culture and improvement of living standards of people. I strongly believe it is a positive development of the economy of the country.
Nowadays people have become more knowledgeable of varieties of products and in a shopping mall they are able to get them easily, whereas in small shops these items may be available in small quantities or not at all. In addition, one of the main attractions of large shopping centre’s the availability of commodities from all around the world under one roof. For examples, Thai mushrooms are readily available in shopping malls but as it is not a very popular item for cooking the small shops may not store them.
Moreover, there are many small shops that have seen considerably profit and have opted to open a shop in the malls or planned to upgrade their business on a larger scale, thereby closing the old shop. For example, an ice cream seller has made a small amount of profit selling ice creams and can do better business if he can set up a small parlor in the mall, he would plan to close the small shop in order to run the parlor. However, a small shop could close down due to a variety of reasons such as the location of the shop, the items in the shop and the marketing strategy of the shopkeeper to attract new customers.
To recapitulate, the large shopping centers hold far more attractions than the local shops which are not always possible for the latter to supply and closure of the small shops need not be entirely because of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67259786477 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56864077415 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.4499996528 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.888888889 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2222222222 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42819390842 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176265985176 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646300999109 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243002729727 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416014606053 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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