Public shopping preference kept on changing from village fate to city market to recently shopping malls. In this essay I will discuss pros and cons of malls with my opinion.
To begin with, large shopping centers have revolutionised the way shopping was done earlier. It brought all the shops under one roof, providing one destination for the customers to purchase variety of goods. It has numerous benefit, first and the most prominent is that it reduces the distance one has to travel in market from one shop to another thus saving their energy which can be capitalized for shopping further. Secondly, parking provision in malls make them a ideal shopping destination for high end customers as they usually commute by cars. It is the one of the major concerns with old markerting areas as they were developed when cars were very rare, usually customers used to come by walking. Thirdly, offers and discount coupons offered by the mall also helps the customers in saving money. Moreover, they can compare the prices of same products on various shops as they are very near to each other they do not have to travel much. Additionally, they also have separate section for kids where they can play games and do other related activities hence they do not disturb their parents while shopping.
On the flip side, it has caused a major dent in the sale's figure of local shops, most of them are at brink of closure, as they are out classed by the malls in the market thus causing unemployment among the local shopkeepers. Malls do not have space for the cottage industry products, which were earlier sold by vendors in the market. This causes the decline in cottage industry which act as driving force of village economy. Further, products in the malls are expensive as their price include all the amenties offered by the malls making them unaffordable for the lower middle class.
Finally, malls are here to stay, they are future of the shopping market, as they need less space and make efficent use of it. Moreover, customers like shopping over there and have faith in transparency offered by them. Malls and small shops should coexist then only the every customer can be served properly and every manufactured good would have a market space.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y, parking provision in malls make them a ideal shopping destination for high end...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, while, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85677083333 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41339661798 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3423549332 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.705882353 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5882352941 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313197945855 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103407008049 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497613210882 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183077108504 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483148020593 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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