Nowadays, due to the technologically adavanced world in which most of the people have to work hard in order to earn money for making a living. While the other group of people believes that some important things in the life cannot be obtained by money. I agree with the given notion to some extent.
There are variety of reasons why I would argue that money plays a central role in our lives. Firstly, housing and finding a suitable accommodation is an indespensable need in people's life and is an important issue for everyone. Consequently, individuals have to earn money to pay for it and without money it is not easy to find a place for living. Secondly, although, education is free in most of the developed countries, fellows who are interested in continuing their higher education have to pay for their tution.
On the other hand, there are some valuable schemes in life such as happiness, success, health, reliable and supportive friends and family members and many others things that are not likely to gain by spending money. Due to achieving these issues people have to work hard, be open minded and ambitious as well as respecting the family morals. An article in renown newspaper in China claimed a majority of residents of rural and urban areas are trained to be thankful for the god endowed gifts and talents. They learn not to compare the life values with money and about 80% of the society feel fulfilled.
After mulling over the topic, it can be asserted that although money plays an undeniable role in today's life, the fundamental values are not gained by money. People should change their attitudes toward life and have a positive outlook on life to lead a happier life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rder to earn money for making a living. While the other group of people believes that...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'suitable accommodation'.
Suggestion: suitable accommodation
...our lives. Firstly, housing and finding a suitable accommodation is an indespensable need in peoples lif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78839590444 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56340123098 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559726962457 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5265637189 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.923076923 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148753688154 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579329109179 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391557405542 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101838237494 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351460728113 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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