In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a negative or positive development?
As we see more organized retail setups in the form of mammoth shopping complexes and malls, consumers are attracted to the wholesome experience which has led to loss in business of retailers playing at local level. In my opinion, this is a welcome development and everyone should be aware that change is constant and we need to upgrade ourselves with time.
Firstly, competition is always healthy in any marketplace. Buyers should have ample options to choose from price, variety, value and service. As customer is the king, this will help in breaking the monopoly in the market. In addition to this, business dynamics will help in enhancing the ethical practices that will benefit the final consumers. To cite an example, after opening up of shopping malls in Delhi NCR region, according to study by consumers research firm, small retailers lowered their margins and it promoted healthy pricing for consumers.
Secondly, Opening up of huge shopping place will mean better employment opportunities and which in turn helps driving the wage rate. More organized and learning prospects means talented people will grow in their careers. Additionally, poverty can be minimized and brain can be controlled. Effective compliance in labour laws means better work-life balance for all employees. For Example, organized retail has helped in improving the registration of employees in provident fund scheme, as per data released by government of labour for the last decade.
To sum it up, Challenging business with new perspective will lead to overall growth of the society and consumers will be ultimately benefitted. Also, personnel growth will be possible in real terms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29433962264 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77693290423 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633962264151 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4495988759 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.214285714 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105497812071 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326265164297 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349925262763 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598812836694 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462742692737 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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