In recent years, there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by young people in the cities.
What has caused this? What solution can you suggest?
Since time immemorial, crime as a social evil has been part of our society. Youngsters are having a noticeable propensity towards criminal activities in the last few years. There are many factors like school drop off, bad company, poor upbringing, and long-term job problems that are responsible for this trend which can be addressed by taking appropriate measures.
The life of juvenile criminals is not normal as other youngsters. They suffer a lot to come up to this stage. Many of them are orphans and do not get parental care which is a major factor of their bad upbringing and they are easy to attract by the poor society of people. Consequently, they start to make criminal mistakes under the impression that an easy and quick way to make money is only criminal activity. Black teens in America, for instance, are most of the victims who get involved in stores robberies, street crimes and eventually ruin their life.
Society as a whole can have a large impact to address this issue. These youngsters live in the same society and providing them moral and financial assistance can save their lives. Governments and individuals can help them to resolve their issues and that is possible to bring them on the right track. Subsequently, they would not feel isolated and would not like to harm anyone. Moreover, their intentions would be diverted towards the right purpose of life and they can start their normal living. There are many companies, for example, Nestle and Coca Cola that have thousands of employees around the world. These companies can provide employment to such young people and help them to live a reasonable life like many other employees. It would also give a chance to live in a society of good people and their life will be changed forever.
The conclusion to be drawn is that they are many factors like jobless, bad society, and poor upbringing which astray the teenagers; however, they can be guided to the right path with the help of good society and government support.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 559, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... crimes and eventually ruin their life. Society as a whole can have a large impa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87719298246 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55628477291 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538011695906 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5643878359 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1176470588 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0824529736871 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299398107138 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292387633591 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0489001244106 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264177106961 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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