In many countries today people are choosing to have fewer children. WHY is this the case? WHAT are the effects of this trend on society?
Raising children is not an easy feat. A myriad of people, in different countries, opt for having fewer babies in order to guarantee a better future for their children. This behaviour can have a positive impact on the community regarding improving its economic state.
To begin with, having less number of children can lead to a superior life for them. To illustrate, when parents have fewer babies, their daily and monthly spending can be reduced immensely, which means a higher opportunity for parents to save more money. They, as a result, are able to provide a prominent future for their children, including joining private schools and having a reputable health care system. For instance, a survey, which was conducted by sociologists at Cairo University in 2018, concluded that 70% of families with one child have the capability to save more money for the tuition fees of international schools for their child, while only 10% of families who have more than three children can afford this salient education to their children. Therefore, the less the number that the parents have, the better future for the children.
This attitude, absolutely, has its effects on society with regard to the improvement of its financial ability. Given the fact that society comprises its individuals, if people adopt the behaviour of having fewer children, it will lessen the total number of individuals in the community noticeably. Hence, there can be a surplus in the domestic output, moreover, the exports volume can be increased substantially. To exemplify, after a successful initiation launched by the Egyptian government in 2011 in order to urge Egyptians to have fewer children, birth rates were decreased by 25%, following which there was a significant improvement in the Egyptian economic system by 40%. Accordingly, it is only through birth control that society's financial state could be enhanced.
To conclude, decreasing birth rates is becoming a well-known attitude from parents nowadays because they want to make sure that their children can enjoy better educational and health levels. This trend has its impacts on the community as it may lead to enhance its financial state and increase local productivity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'exports'' or 'export's'?
Suggestion: exports'; export's
...s in the domestic output, moreover, the exports volume can be increased substantially. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, as a result, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23661971831 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7982537701 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552112676056 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.2648601185 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.933333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210495773739 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779236080995 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418097846206 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135743248752 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346716042517 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.