Relying on fossil fuels such as oil and coal for our energy needs is becoming increasingly impractical the rising cost and the decrease in supply of this fuels along with concerns about Global Warming they cost means we must final an alternative the only a realistic alternative is nuclear energy . To what extent do you agree or disagree
One of the most severe problems the world is facing today is energy shortage. Fossil fuels are scarce, expensive and highly polluting and other source of energy such as solar,wind, tidal and biogas are inadequate to meet human's huge demand. Hence,this essay is in absolute agreement to the common belief that nuclear energy is the only dependable alternative.
To begin with,Energy Crisis is looming large as a result of the present sources of fossil fuels being used up fast.For example, it is estimated that these sources will not last more than another half century.Measures are already afoot to find alternative sources of power. Solar energy and wind energy are a few of them and are extensively being used, but it can help only to a limited extent.It is generally accepted that only nuclear energy can meet the big global demand.
However, scientist are optimistic about finding a remedy for energy shortage in the near future. For instance nuclear energy is cheap and its supply abundant. As such, scientist are working continually to evolve methods for the safe and economic production of Nuclear power on commercial basis. Although, presently there are a few nuclear power plants around the world ,their safety is of great concern. And the erection of a nuclear power plant is highly expensive at present.
To wind up, Energy Crisis is a big threat the world is facing today. The present source of energy, fossil fuels are not only running out but they are also causes of acute pollution. However scientific researches are hopeful of developing cheap,pollution-free nuclear energy a reliable alternative in plentiful supplies in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12546125461 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7833887434 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553505535055 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.84656301 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182419005632 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655869426198 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376361513681 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117438336223 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199899544912 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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