Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees who are from poor countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, more and more skilled professionals from developing countries immigrate to developed countries in the hope of better life, better job and better prospect. Some people consider the trend as positive for host countries and argue that wealthy nations should open their doors more widely to the competent and learned immigrant. But others, on the other hand, contend that rich countries would be engulfed by the increasing wave of these immigrants. In the case, I am of the honest opinion that the
For a start, when the well-educated, skilled migrant migrates to the host country, they bring with them the human capital. It is such a cost that the host country do not need to bear that is net advantage to the nation they come to augment. That is to say, the worth of the migrant is here not actually their lifetime income but rather the cost the host country do not need to cover as they already are educated and trained without the investment of the host country. In addition, the migrant are willing to work with low salaries compared with locals. The benefit directly goes to the consumer. To give an illustration of what I mean, let’s look at the case of firms which hire the skilled migrant mostly. These firms can provide cheaper services while maintaining same quality, which by consequence benefits to the consumer.
On the flip side, there also are several drawbacks. Employers may ignore training, innovation, and productivity when they get skilled migrants who are willing to work for relatively low pay. Besides, large numbers of skilled professional can swell the ranks of the unemployed. On the top of that, the increased population may put pressure on public service. In my opinion, however, the skilled migrant phenomenon is actually brain drain. The countries that experience brain drain suffer a great loss. The investment in tertiary education is lost as the highly educated professionals leave the homeland and become an asset to the host country.
All things considered, it seems reasonable to assume that skilled migrants are the double-edge sword as they contribute as well as become burden to some extent for the host nation, but the phenomenon severely affects the country from which the highly educated individuals leave.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brained'.
Suggestion: brained
... skilled migrant phenomenon is actually brain drain. The countries that experience br...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, i mean, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0614973262 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67623551885 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542780748663 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.55876857 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.166666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221115651899 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584958056491 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512336321762 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13595935949 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046536164929 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brained'.
Suggestion: brained
... skilled migrant phenomenon is actually brain drain. The countries that experience br...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, i mean, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0614973262 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67623551885 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542780748663 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.55876857 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.166666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221115651899 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584958056491 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512336321762 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13595935949 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046536164929 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.