School teachers are more responsible for the social and intellectual development of students than parents.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Students spend more time in school mostly listening to the lectures. Social and intellectual development is tend to happen at school more than home. Teachers have always known to be best guidance to students. This essay will argue that though life is not completely based on schools for students as they all come from a home, so the parents too, play an important role in the social and intellectual development of a student’s life.
School teachers shape the minds of students but parent prepare them for their future. Though a student spends more time in the school he or she come from a home. The roles of parents also play important when it comes to morality and bonding. Financially it is the parents who support the student in career goals. In many cases parents have been the role model in the life of a student.
Teachers mold the minds of the students at school than parents. When a student is facing distress due to issues at home or with friends it is the teacher they find more comfortable to discuss with. Teachers are always known to be best guidance in various popular figures’ life. At school a student is more likely to converse and demonstrate their views and opinions. Teachers help the students in attaining the right knowledge. If not for a teacher, a student would not be able to perceive his or her dreams. It is the teacher who points right direction and imparts motivation to a student. Overall, the teachers play more crucial role in the construction of neighborhood and knowledge of the students.
This essay argued that though teachers play crucial role in the development of the students’ social and intellectual skills, the parents too play their part of the role.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
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Suggestion: be the best
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Suggestion: be the best
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'to play'?
Suggestion: to play
...al and intellectual skills, the parents too play their part of the role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71300030941 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472789115646 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5809686232 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9444444444 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310116710409 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117416709033 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752102856029 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208325074831 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069851892954 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.