Nowadays, many people opine that schools should focus on subjects that can help students find a job rather than traditional subjects such as Art or History. I firmly disagree with this statement because traditional subjects are as important as job-oriented subjects are.
First of all, schools curriculum may vary from school to school. However, their primary objective is same everywhere. The primary objective should include alternative subjects not only academic subjects like Maths or Science but also Art or History. Schools are meant to nurture young children’s creativity, foster their talent and open windows to improve imagination. From this perspective, teaching diversity of subjects is necessary.
Furthermore, it is essential to teach children traditional subjects such as arts or history. Many people claim that schools must spend more time on job-oriented subjects because of the competitive world. Children should know required skills to deal with the problems in alternative situations. However, knowledge of history and arts allows children become more complete than being robots in the future. Socialization needs historians, environmentalists, and artists no less than engineers or doctors. Depending on what children’s talents and favourite, schools must have the suitable courses and subjects.
In conclusion, schools must equally focus on traditional subjects because they are as important as job-oriented subjects. Moreover, developing in different and diversity of courses helps children to show the hidden potential and ability.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, in conclusion, of course, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87719298246 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05431996059 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2080564373 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320088202348 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973702093922 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877257425991 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185711828988 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780512319365 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.23 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, in conclusion, of course, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87719298246 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05431996059 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2080564373 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320088202348 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973702093922 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877257425991 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185711828988 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780512319365 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.23 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.