Science is advanced so fast that it can now make it possible for people to live 100 years or even 200 years. Some people think it is beneficial, while others think it will cause problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
nowadays medicine and technologies have developed the level of living extremely, which cause possibility to prolong human being for more than 50 years. some people hold the opinion that longer existence has a lot of advantages. others, on the contrary, maintain that humanity could face with numerous problems.
The main reason why the majority of community are positive about long living is that nobody wants to die or to loose someone close but it is only the tip of the iceberg. definitely, scientific researches could make existence longer which gives myriad of opportunities to gifted scientists, musicians or politics. For example, famous scientist Albert Einshtain found out the fundamental phisics laws and, who knows, how many researches he might had to do if only he would live longer for 50 years.
On the other hand, such a long living might have some drawbacks. For instance, overpopulation, that civilisation already faced nowadays, could raised rapidly and lead to shortage of resources such as food and water, which could have a knock-on-effect and make problem of pollution and global warming much worse. Moreover, recent scientific researches have shown that today overpopulation happened definitely due to increased life expectancy which in turn increased due to the development of science.
In conclusion, the question of making people's life longer is a difficult one to answer definitively, However, based on the reasons analysed above, I believe that science should give freedom of choice to humanity and government should make decisions how to control the disadvantages associated with increasing life expectancy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47843137255 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98728305552 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650980392157 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7022815828 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.7 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136841527408 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549356045277 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409776887008 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818856668102 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240681072419 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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