Science tells some activities are dangerous to health.But some people continue to live unhealthy.What are the causes of it and what can be done to solve this problem.
The vast growth in scientific field has helped man-kind in various ways to lead a healthy lifestyle. Despite several warnings from science,the human population still continue to carry out multiple peril actions which has adverse impacts on their health. This essay will discuss few causes of it and how to overcome this problem.
Firstly, some of the most common practices that are prevailing as major threats to people are unhealthy food options and sedentary life style. Numerous scientific journals and articles, stating the importance of organic produces and non- genetically modified foods have been floating across the world. However, people still opt for non- organic and genetically modified foods because of skyrocketing rates of these products. Adding to that, science has brought huge awareness about the prominent benefits of physical activities. Still ,majority of the human population cannot incorporate them into their day to day life due their long working hours. Thus it is very clear that exorbitant price of organic products and prolonged work timings of people in today's world are important causes for the unhealthy life style.
To address this issue, government and multi- national companies should take few steps from their side. To start with, government should fix a nominal price for organic products that are free from pesticides and genetic modification, so that it is easily affordable by public to buy and consume it. Secondly, multinational companies and private sectors that employs a huge crowd of human population should impose strict rules on the fixed working hours and encourage them to have a perfect work life balance. As a result ,when the above actions are implemented ,it would be easy for the people to choose healthy products and lead a active life style.
To recapitulate, it is obvious that if healthy food options are available at a cheaper price and when people have time to incorporate physical activities, the can invade majority of threats their health faces as warned by science and lead a disease-free , prosperous life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27190332326 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66680936468 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580060422961 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8518724189 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.642857143 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114776515358 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402452994375 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408133047272 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720003721698 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214763098873 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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