The environment we are living is in danger due to various problems. what are the underlying causes? who do you think should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual ? What measures?
Nowadays, there are many problems in environment, which attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention from the public. It can be agreed that government should enforce strict laws against people, while on the other hand stands a perspective that people and organization should be responsible for this. This essay will elaborate on various causes and mitigations and thus will lead to logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous ways how the environment is getting affected and the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that emission of greenhouse gases from air conditioners and industries. As an illustration, there are many industries which are not following proper procedures for pollution control and this adversely affects the environment. Because of that, the place we are living are getting affected.
Approaches to deal with the setbacks originated by industrial wastes and greenhouse gas emission are numerous, and the most effective one is that government should enforce strict laws against industries and should ban the use of greenhouse gases. For instance, many developing nations have already implemented this rule to curb the damage to our environment. Furthermore, individuals should be responsible to avoid use of cheap products which in turn emits greenhouse gases. Thus, our environment can be protected from further damage.
In light of discussion above, it can be concluded that the impact of environment damage is prominent and the way government enforcing law should be well handled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, thus, well, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50847457627 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00765087793 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584745762712 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5334835349 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.181818182 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143388355159 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564692787985 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467412454486 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090086864117 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282115621973 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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