We are fortunate to live in the scientific era which has witnessed unprecedented breakthroughs in healthcare. In addition, we have access to whole host of information on healthy lifestyles. Despite the awareness on ill-effects of unhealthy habits, many individuals tend to inculcate them. In the following paragraphs, I intend to delve into the reasons for this trend and the measures that can address this issue.
To begin with, through the years, people have developed proclivity for ready-made and artificial foods which are packed with artificial sweeteners and preservatives. Another common addiction that is observed is towards cigarette smoking and alcohol consumption. A survey conducted by World Health Organization, famously referred as WHO, reveals that an appalling 70 percent of youth in America are either chain smokers or alcohol consumers. This behavior can be attributed to the stimulants that go into the preparation of the artificial snacks and aerated drinks as well as the tobacco and nicotine in the cigarettes and alcoholic beverages, that lure people to consume them.
Another reason is,owing to the busyness in personal and professional life, people disregard physical burnout to a great extent. Although, it is widely known that physical fitness has remarkable benefits, many individuals find it arduous and feel lethargic to hit the gymnasium for regular exercise.
To mitigate the impacts, firstly, there is a dire need to to increase the price of tobacco and alcoholic products.Secondly, stringent action should be taken against the manufacturers who adulterate eatables. Thirdly, global level awareness campaigns should be conducted to promulgate the prominence of physical exercise.
To encapsulate, there are innumerable causes that encourage people to follow detrimental habits even after being abreast with the healthy recommendations from scientific researches. Intake of adulterated foods, smoking tobacco, excessive alcohol consumption are few to quote. To attenuate these problems, it is the need of the hour to implement productive measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in addition, as well as, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71382636656 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17422793065 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623794212219 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3722139025 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.466666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130969224815 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359033415697 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377412822403 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610972604038 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411593851791 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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