Science tells us about the activities which are good for health and which are bad. Millions of people all over the world knows this and still do un healthy activities. Why do you this this is and what can be done to change it.
Now-a-days, technology has reached to the point where we completely possess the understanding about the healthy and unhealthy routine for our body. Even after knowledge of such activities, many people choose to ignore it and continue with their unhealthy lifestyle. There are several reasons behind this behavior, such as ignorance, which are responsible. In my opinion, a portion of heath care budget should be dedicated to spread awareness among people.
To begin with, there are few factors which are related to human tendencies, are quite obvious compared to others. Humans are slave to their desire which means they cannot control behavior though they are quite aware about the detrimental effect of certain types of food on their body. For instance, everybody understands that sugar deteriorate health but still prefer to consume a lot of sugar in their everyday life. Furthermore, the negative effect is not spontaneous so by the time people realize, it is already too late for them. Thus, ignorance and long term effect are the two key factors which contribute to unhealthy activities.
Obviously, people can change if they are driven by proper motivation. The most effective way to address the issue is to provide certain incentives on following healthy lifestyle. For instance, Government can allot part of health care budget to distribute benefit to their citizen if they follow exercise. Moreover, precaution is better than cure and in this way a problem can be fixed before it can ever come in to existence that means authorities have to invest less for medical expenses in the long run. Additionally, more programs should be organized to aware about the consequences of unhealthy life in their old age. So, financial advantages and awareness can be a sustainable way to fix the issue.
In conclusion, although individuals are enough aware about the repercussion of unhealthy activities, they still require knowledge about the easy way in which they can enjoy healthy life. Otherwise, it will have serious implication on their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25227963526 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80497217849 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577507598784 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6410840847 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.647058824 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202521157687 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624826602401 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386070633215 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125461814104 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149133703918 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.