New tools of science suggest that certain activities of people brings negative impact to their life. But despite all of this people continued to be naive and still pursue the habit. In this essay, I will vividly express logical reasons of this issue and how to correct it.
Firstly, mostly workers in urban areas doesn't have time to put sweat on their hands due to strict office hours and travel issues. In metropolitan cities time is important, a split second that you're late will cost you a deduction of your salary or even worst get stack on a traffic that will eat up most of your day. For example, an employee lives 2 hours away from their workplace needs to start their travel 5am to be enable to reach their job place in 7.50m, which logically is the start of their work. Secondly, though most of the people are aware of the negative impact of unhealthy traditions they been doing in their life, some of them really doesn't know the side effects. For instance, people who was accustomed to lighting up cigarette day by day was not aware that each stick is actually degrading their life expectancy rating.
With the above challenges, I strongly believe that an action must be taken swiftly. Private companies should allocate ample amount of time to employees to do some exercise before starting their daily work routine. Same as government agencies, they had organize a regular exercise right after the flag ceremony, which is highly recommended for better health. Moreover, government should mandate a law to stop unnecessary habits that will literally don't do any good to every single person, such as cigarette smoking. With this, it will not only halted the possibility of any lung dreaded disease but also it will help our air to be clean.
In conclusion, science help us determine bad habits such as no regular exercise and cigarette smoking. But, proper management for high brass private companies and government officials can mitigate this issues by proper implementation of rules and regulations to help benefit the institution or country but mainly the people itself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'even the worst'.
Suggestion: even the worst
... cost you a deduction of your salary or even worst get stack on a traffic that will eat up...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'traffic'.
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... your salary or even worst get stack on a traffic that will eat up most of your day. For ...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'organized'.
Suggestion: organized
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Suggestion: organized
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Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'halt'
Suggestion: halt
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92351274788 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49457838077 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626062322946 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1312235759 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.866666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207117757898 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659940623158 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426891208673 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127181234706 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423700881088 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.